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Name: Mombaki

Age: 14 

Gender: Male

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Personality: While actually quite intelligent, Mombaki is fairly inexperienced in the wider world and somewhat naive, although by now he understands some things like the importance of money. He often makes attempts at being serious and contemplative to seem mature, but his real nature is one of full on hot-blooded-ness and a generally easily excitable mode of being, especially whenever the possibility of finishing his quest comes up. Mombaki has a head filled with visions of success and glory that's only been slightly tempered by his more recent misfortunes. He wants to be a strong magic-user and hunter and trains diligently towards that goal despite his youth, and while he desperately wants to find his way home, he also hopes to find a new home with Mystic Ram until he can go back. 

Biography: Mombaki formerly belonged to a reclusive, semi-nomadic forest tribe that depended on Seith Magic for much of their day-to-day survival and bound themselves with animal spirits as a matter of course. Though the tribe wasn't part of 'civilized' society, Mombaki was taught many useful skills from a young age, as well as the secrets of the Animal Possession magic that his people relied upon. 

As part of a coming-of-age ceremony Mombaki was sent out and required to do something extraordinary to prove himself. Dreaming mainly of glory and with no thought as to the consequences, he ranged further and further from his ancestral lands looking for something truly legendary to accomplish. Nothing he saw could quite match up to his hopes and inexperienced as he was he eventually got lost. Unable to find his way home, he took to wandering in earnest, wanting to find his way back but knowing he could not return until he had accomplished something worthy of his tribe and himself.

Mombaki eventually found himself in the city and having learned about Guilds from people he met who found out he was a Magic User, he practically begged to join Mystic Ram. The way he thought of things at least, joining a Guild was the best way to find or accomplish things extraordinary enough to get accepted back into his tribe. Not to mention he needed some way to earn a living while he was lost and aside from magic and fighting he didn't have very much in the way of marketable skills. 

Magic: 

[b]Seith Magic-Animal Possession[/b]
A type of Caster Magic where the user binds the wandering spirits of animals into their own body and then channels them for various results. While Mombaki has yet to fully master this magic or explore all of its' limits and uses he's very proficient with it and has already bound several animal spirits to himself that he employs in his spells. Currently he can only channel one Animal at a time, and his ability to channel their traits and powers is somewhat limited.

[b]Tiger Possession-Right Arm[/b]
This technique involves Mombaki channeling a tiger soul through his right arm, causing it to be surrounded by an aura in the shape of a tiger's head and vastly increasing his striking power. The roaring tiger's ethereal fangs and powerful jaws are meant to shred through and crush enemies and obstacles alike. In terms of raw power it's currently Mombaki's strongest spell. Though strong it is an extremely close range spell meant for hand-to-hand combat. and in its' current form it is highly telegraphed and easy to avoid

[b]Ostrich Possession-Legs[/b]
This spell involves Mombaki channeling the spirit of a large, flightless bird into his legs and gives him vastly heightened running speed as well as increasing his kicking power. Despite the large boost leg-power giving him very impressive speed, Mombaki cannot turn quickly while channeling this spirit and is mainly restricted to linear movements while he uses its' powers.

[b]Turtle Possession-Full Body[/b]
The only full-body channeling Mombaki is capable of performing, the Turtle possession surrounds Mombaki and his immediate area in a large aura in the shape of a turtle shell. The turtle aura provides a very powerful defense, as the shell is an extremely durable shield against attacks both magical and physical. On the downside, while surrounded by the Turtle Shield Mombaki becomes almost entirely unable to move or attack, leaving him protected but usually unable to strike back while channeling it.