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In addressing your God's vagueness problem, you've created a new one. Firstly, as stated before, I wanted to leave out any sort of souls or afterlife worlds out, so this Goddess of the Undead character is a bit iffy for me. Worse than that, however, is the fact that she was able to turn a mortal into a God. I've gotta' say no to that. The God's are pieces of Melkaia, and wouldn't be able to do that.

I hate to tear into you like this, but while I'm at it, I have a bit of an issue with your nation's inhabitants. You've got literally one of each of the high-fantasy generic races. Your nation has elves, dwarves, humans, and orcs. I'm not sure I like that idea. There's already a nation of elves, and a nation of dwarves, [i]and[/i] a nation of orcs. So, having a sort of melting-pot nation of all of those races just seems strange. You're free to create your own race, or a derivative of some already-made race, but I don't want you to have all of those. 

So, basically, Uldir's origins are still not quite where I'd want them to be, and your nation's inhabitants should be switched up.

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You're accepted, by the way. Just announcing that formally. Speaking thus,

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I'm working on an accepted player roster right now. Once that's completed, I'll be writing Malag's opening post. If I've accepted your nation/God already, you may begin posting. Let's not get too far though, since Rin's having some connection issues and Tatsua's not quite finished with their sheet.