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I edited my post to a character sheet.
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Okay, just a few things to say.

I would like if you could go deeper into description. The few words given aren't bad but the image that comes to mind is quite generic. 

Also his history, I will assume that the farm was either not in the walls, or else the cyclops would not have gotten in to it (unless you explain how it did.) and it would be good if you could explain that fact. Also, how did Damien kill a cyclops alone when he was young and had access to assumably nothing but farm tools? This also begs the question as to how he continued to kill the many other and tougher monsters afterwards before getting training. 

Basically it seems a tad bit bare boned...I don't mean to seem so critical and rude, but I have slightly raised standards for this RP. 

Also his stuff seems a bit basic for an S class, i'm not saying he can't be with just that equipment, he can make up for it with skill, I am just asking if you are making him so just because you can? 

(GOD I FEEL LIKE AN ASS FOR THIS)