@Stitches? What do you mean about grimdark? Isnt Daemyn's character an optimistic/happy character? Also, the last part is asking what class you teach. Your character is the Charms teacher, correct? So put that in that category. Also, pick a time of day you want to teach that class. Otherwise, everything looks perfect. @Daemyn: It looks good. Accepted, though Id ask you to clean up your Skills section. It seems as though you've muddled up a bunch of unneeded personality traits in there. For example 'doesnt give up easily' and 'attention seeking and overbearing' are things that aren't really needed in that section. I understand that some personality traits can be a real advantage/disadvantage but I guess Im looking for more tangible things like being clumsy, bad at following procedures, poor memory, etc. Though, if youre lazy, you really dont neeeed to do this. :)