RondoNumbaNine: Yes, I think your character is all set. I'll give final word to the hatter. Also, In an attempt to make my character a bit more well-defined I've doodled a bit... Here's what I've done: Added one more line of text to "Today" (last line). Added a whole bunch of text to personality. Added one item to equipment (tea leaves). So check it out if you're curious, link is in the OP.