[quote=Clockykiller]
Name: Kendall (Jackel) JyfexAge: 16Skills: Very good fighter when needed, good listener, and very good at spotting out the unknown.Ability: can turn into a Fox anytime.Appearance: Long dark brown hair with Dark green streaks, bright green eyes with slit pupils, usually wears brown Jacket, gray jeans, black sneakers, and is 5'4".Fox form: Brown Fox with dark green tint and bright green eyes and white underbelly with dark green paws and ear tips.Personality: shy at times, sarcastic, fun to be around. Backstory: She was a normal girl who had a hard time keeping her deepest secret ,being a fox, she hated hiding. So one day she went into the middle of the street and turned into a fox. A lot of people saw and called her a monster or a freak. She saw and ran into the shadows of the ally and lived her life as a fox-girl in secret. She hoped one day she would find other supernaturals as she called them.
[/quote]
Looks ok except why does she live on the streets?