Sweet holy fuck I had the worst time possible reading Tristain and Andrew talk. THIS IS WHY YOU SEPARATE NEW SPEAKERS INTO NEW PARAGRAPHS. I thought fucking Ginger was talking to me, until I realized Andrew was REFERRING to Ginger, without ever leaving the fucking PoV. [quote]Ginger sat down next to Andrew and noticed the blood on his knuckles.[/quote] LOOK AT THIS SHIT. THIS IMPLIES ANDREW WAS THE ONE WRECKING THE PUNCHING BAG. I'm sorry, and I'm taking that WAY out of proportion, but that entire paragraph was murder on my eyes to try and sort. Please fix. Edit: And then apparently I pulled over a table. I see.