Wow... You're being active xD *ahem* @ChibiYuki; The rest of my evaluation of your character: I had the feeling (or gave the feeling, rather) that you were going to have your character be a medic as it's main focus and a Hyuuga as it's second focus, if you get what I'm trying to say? That was why I suggested making a Hyuuga medic. [quote=The Mad Hatter] Personally, I think the Medic would be a good idea. Medics need to be intelligent and are extremely adept at chakra control, as that is the potency they need to perform the Mystical Palm. They are trained to stay out of the line of fire as their main goal is to keep alive so they can keep their team alive. Normally, I would never suggest this, but you could make a Hyuuga Medic. Since the leader of the village is a Hyuuga that actually came from Konoha and knows the Hyuuga techniques and all, he probably wouldn't want another Hyuuga around, though. He's only the leader because of his KG and his potency at using it, after all. It would give your character the possiblity of fighting back, though. [/quote] Hyuuga are naturally good at chakra control, they can release chakra from every chakra point in their body, they have "X-Ray" vision (and tons of jokes made about it) ... They make great medics, even without their clan styles and techniques. And as I said (and now quoted) the leader of the village (Hyuuga Dude) probably would [i]not[/i] want to train another Hyuuga in the Hyuuga arts, since these skills are the reason he is the top dog. You and Halvtand already talked about the background stuff, so assume that is taken care of? @Pasta; The "Freezes Up" trait is a nice, human trait to add. It gives the character a personality boost. Thumbs up for that. And you and Halvtand already fixed the issue I would have had with the tactician trait, so that's good, too. @About the "Based on Men" issue; Honestly, most women IRL are like that, so it makes sense that they make it that way in fiction, too... Throughout most of human history (until not that long ago) a woman's job was to make her man happy. Lots of women (most women) still act like that...