Nice character Melon. Approved although if possible please just break up the powers so they are in individual text blocks and don't run together. The poison is nice, I think you worded it nicely allowing a resistant save if the opponent has the ability to do so. As for your concern about an opponent being reasonably stuck, if you manage to successfully enact the attack I think based on the opponent and their powers/abilities I will adjudicate the effect in terms of posts to break free.