[quote=El_Tigre] Question: I have two sections noted as Works In Progression, though the one is in the Fate Expenditure and it is the explanation of what a Vampire entails. Do I need to write that out? I am fairly certain most people know the origin and general information about Vampires. lol [/quote] The details of a vampire are more of elaborating specifically as to what aspect the character really shows. For example, people know what a zoanthrope is, and some know what a weretiger is - few, if any, know they're mostly iconic for their remarkable fury. It's something universally spread in their lore, and Asher exemplifies it; he's not an exception. So, in the case of a vampire, what [i]kind[/i] of vampire? Are they the cunning charismatic who seduces their prey? The blood thirsty hunter at night who stalks and kills those too foolish to go down an alley? Things of that nature. The only thing I can readily think of that I removed from vampires is that they need permission to enter a home - from the master of the house (or appointee). That was just... crippling.