[quote=WatermelonTango]
You need to space out your words a little bit. Just hit enter and separate your sentences so that each point is clear. It'll make your CS a bit easier to read and cause less eye strain. As for the history itself, it doesn't really make much sense to me. These abilities everyone haven't been inserted into them, it's just something that "triggers" when their mind looses grip with their sanity. But I do like your premise. Feel free to disregard my suggestions, but maybe the doctor's experiments weren't to give her powers, but to attempt to make the "perfect girl". Maybe he would force plastic surgery on your character and put you through strict lessons of etiquette. And whenever you refused to cooperate he would punish you by locking in you a freezer for several hours until you were willing to cooperate. This over the course of weeks or months could easily push somebody over the edge. I also think it would tie the theme together nicely if you used your ice powers to kill him but that's inserting myself a bit too much into your work methinks.But remember that I'm not the GM, so the final say is entirely up to Inuyasha.
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Yeah, powers have to do something with origin of insanity.