Posted. I don't mind the sap really as long as it's not everything is too sappy. This story is a dram so internal monologues, wise sayings, and enlightened moments are common occurrences. I'm rather displeases with Summer in this post. I don't know why, but I still can't figure out how to properly write her dialog. I'm going for an immature and somewhat naive voice, but surprisingly smart and strong willed. Also I need to work on transitions more since the back and forth form Summer to Alex is kind of weird.