[quote=Soul]
Abilities/Skills-
[b]Immense knowledge[/b] over battle tactics,[b] magic[/b] both physical and spiritual, and the human body.[s] Also has quite a bit of knowledge of martial art forms and weaponry katas.[/s] [b]Has a genius-level intellect, and an IQ level higher than most. Can react to events almost instantaneously.[/b]
[/quote]
Everything bolded makes me either confused or seems like too much.
Strike outs are fine
[quote=Soul]
Powers
Control over his own Mental Capacity, involving Telekinesis and it's variants.
[/quote]
By saying telekinesis and it's variants it seems like a lot.
Read this, this is telekinesis. [url=http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Telekinesis]. Which is way too much
[quote=Soul]
Weaknesses
[s]Not the best in social interaction,[/s][b] and a bullet to the brain would also do some damage.[/b]
[/quote]
Strike-out is fine.
1. The bolded is a normal weakness so you can't really put that, it's stating the obvious.
2. I specifically put that you need at least 3 weaknesses.
---
Please don't take me not accepting you yet the wrong way. You made a creative character but it is too OP for a roleplay about young, teenagers learning how to control their powers