The personality section is not what it's supposed to be. It's supposed to be about his personality and the events that may or may not have effected. Most of it is history based. The literally ONLY part that defines him personally is the first four words.

Also while the history is good it's not suited for this roleplay. Even if it the assassin targets are the leaders of the crime gangs a cold blooded killer will get in trouble with the police....whom we're going to working to a rather decent extent. I simply don't know how to fit a killer of men into this roleplay that's supposed to be filled with people. The way I'm putting us all together in this roleplay is going to be with a bank heist. Also in the FAQ I specifically state the following: 

5. This will be a little darker in the sense of a Dark Knight (Batman) sense where there will be violence and possibly death but not on a scale I hope to keep this true to the series and prevent character deaths if possible.

In other words I will not accept the character as he is. While there will be deaths and serious injuries in this roleplay I don't need a player character specifically made to be going out to go and murder people in the city for an elite group of assassins whatever be it.