Sorry about the quiet weekend I had a lot to do elsewhere but anyway let's get on with CS reviews: [b]Henri Fontaine Delacroix AKA Del by The Wacko[/b] Tijuana is one city that spans the area of the dome so they don't really have "warlords" per say but there are plenty of drug rings and gun dealers he could have worked with. Other than that Henri is now a part of the crew on the Blue Jay. [b]Otakor Stauton AKA Knight by MrShoe[/b] An assault rifle is not something you can easily carry around on most of the more "civilized" colonies like Mars or Ganymede so you probably want to invest in a small handgun that can be concealed under a shirt unless Knight would be content with being limited to using just his sword from time to time. In regards to his ship; 11 people seems a bit much so cut the capacity down to six in the hold and two in the cockpit, also keep in mind that Knight will have to pay for the upkeep of the Black Knight so he will always have less money than others in the crew. Other than that welcome to the Blue Jay. [b]Tamia Michel AKA Tally by Tarantulass[/b] Again a rifle is not something you can walk around with most places so it's practical uses would be very limited, although having a drug-addicted prostitute pay for high end black market gear of any kind seems like a stretch even if the gear is faulty it would still cost a considerable amount more than some one could make selling their body. I would need a little more information about how exactly she obtained her gear, I would also like to know what the visor actually does before I accept it. [b]Jackronicus Hawkfry by Thedreadpirate[/b] This one I like a lot but preferences aside, it was never specified if any families lived on Pluto but since this is an alternate universe I suppose it's acceptable. I never really intended for there to be any specific "ship's mechanic" but I'm glad to see that the role will be filled with the added plus of having a tech savvy member of the crew. You will have to explain how exactly he got away with assaulting a government employee and then ended up working in the prison but other than that I welcome you to the crew of the Blue Jay. [b]Guy Funnuchi by manapool1[/b] This one doesn't seem to fit in anywhere in the solar system. I'm not really sure what planet you're talking about in the history and you didn't give any information about the ship that's mentioned either. If this is unfinished then I apologize for jumping the gun but only the places mentioned in the first post of the OOC are inhabited and no one has ever traveled outside the solar system so there aren't any aliens to speak of. Also take some time to punctuate your sentences please, it makes it a lot easier for dyslexic people like me to follow what you're writing. I think that's every one who applied but if I missed you let me know, it happens.