That last part though dude scary and intense. Loved it. 

 So how did y'all want to go about with the whole vampire turning thang? I know some people have a specific way they like it some just don't care, personally I get all my vamper...traits from True Blood (its a show) Really they capture a vampires true essence none of that bullshit stuff Stephanie Meyer brought in and ruined the vampire image. Its all about the blood, and uh 'relations' but, I know that's not done here their animistic yet sophisticated and territorial. And when it comes to turning the whole maker and progeny bond is true to it, at least for some of em. Their bonded by the blood, which is poetic yet weird yes. But anyway done with my little rant! I think turning should be done by the vampire draining the human near to death then feeding them their blood, which is a healing factor and how they mark humans as theirs. 

 Sorry if I weirded some of y'all out...