[quote=Ink Blood]
Here is my character sheet. Let me know anything that needs changed. Please forgive typos and such. I was forced to type this up on my phone.
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In general my request is that you add more detail as to why. For example, what exactly makes him depressed; what was the exact scenario that happened prior to his suicide that drove him that far, and why did he rise as a Revenant? How does he contend with an addiction that can no longer give him his high, as his biological functions have ceased? 

Given you wrote this on a phone, it isn't bad at all. I would just like to know more about the character and who and why Wraith exists as well.