[quote=VarionusNW]
Now I feel like an ass. I've been having some problems IRL, so I don't know why the hell I tried to rush this out. I see my mistakes, and will be backing out of this due to feeling like a piece of shit. If you guys want to continue this yourselves, go ahead, I'm just going to sit here and learn from my mistakes.
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You have obviously not failed like a boss as a GM. I, on the other hand, have a lot of experience failing. There is nothing wrong with this RP, and there is no reason for you to back out. Only an idiot claims infallibility. So, there is nothing you can't fix in this RP. It hasn't even properly started yet, and I love the idea this RP puts out.