I've modified my CS, I hope it's to more of a standard now. EDIT: I know I was accepted already, but could you look over it one more time? I've just outlined some of the Ljus' sub systems present that I think would be kept in such a vessel. It is designed to theoritically try to cripple an advanced alien warship, after all. And I have tried to make it as balanced as possible, what with timers on all it's systems and having absolutely no firepower at all.