@Aegon: NPC ships will be decided once we're ready to start. It really depends on the number of players and the sides they choose. @Sovi3t: No FTL, and your professional numbers seem a bit high. Aegon's ship is already very militarized, with 10% of its staff in the nightingale group. Your military gets closer to 20% of the population. You also probably have more medical professionals than your population actually needs, but that's more of an optimizing thing on your part than a balancing concern for me. Besides these small concerns, I like the bio. Fix it up and you're in. Oh, and you can definitely introduce more people throughout the plot. I only put two characters in my bio, so I'd be pretty well screwed if I couldn't. Especially considering I want to kill one.