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Okay, first off, Goldmyr, I'm sorry I'm taking so long giving you feedback.Secondly...@ice2365: While I'm not judging your entire bio as it is unfinished, I have to point out that eradicating the supernatural is a tremendously bad idea and also pretty firmly placed in the "evil" category. It would involve killing all demons, youkai, vampires, any other supernatural creatures, magi, onmyouji, anything holy(that's supernatural too)... basically it's probably not the best character motivation if you want them to be joining a Supernatural Detective Agency.
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There i changed it.