[quote=PajkaNight]
I like writing graphic and gory stories, sometimes on Friday the 13th, sometimes on Halloween, impaling people is Child's Play. Don't worry though, a quick walk around Elm Street will surely be a Hellraiser for you. X3 I won't hold a Grudge for the people who aren't horror writers. I should go see my doctor Hannibal Lecter, shouldn't I? I swear I Saw this coming.
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Oh but impaleing people onto a building while there alive. And I've watched elm street on Friday the 13th I wrote horror. But as I say you don't want to scare away your readers in the first page. Implying is child's play but doing it while there alive to a tree it's creepy in the first page. And I the main twist is that someone the detective knows is the serial killer who is going around killing people more gruesome each time.