[quote=PsychoticBreakDown]
Oh but impaleing people onto a building while there alive. And I've watched elm street on Friday the 13th I wrote horror. But as I say you don't want to scare away your readers in the first page. Implying is child's play but doing it while there alive to a tree it's creepy in the first page. And I the main twist is that someone the detective knows is the serial killer who is going around killing people more gruesome each time.
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Oh, I was just being silly. ^.^ Trying to fit many as many Horror film titles into a paragraph. XD