I've been a bit inactive on this thread, so let me make up for lost time;

1Charak2's CS:
Minarawr basically said it for that one; Your CS has many errors. Most are small, and I can deal with a few small errors, but there are a [i]lot[/i] of errors. Not just spelling, but punctuation as well.

BlazingxLynx's CS: 
Your CS in fine in my eyes. Everything checks out okay on my end.