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Don't worry about it. Writing takes practice. Don't feel like you have to rush through the post. Take your time and think about what you want to say, and how you want it said. It helps to say certain lines out loud (even though other people may look at you weird).You'll get a sense of where punctuation should go by listening to where you naturally pause. Those pauses are usually commas.