Biddz, Alright then. Muahahaha. Archmage, May or may not be the case but the CS thread isn't really the place to talk about it. TJ, It looks well enough, It looks pretty good but you can revise if you wish. The only thing is the fact she can create weapons out of mid-air. I'd rather she just carried an arsenal because creating weapons like that out of nothing violates a fundamental law of the universe or two :P Maybe in red fury she can make red hardlight weapons? Krein, I like it a lot, I accepted it earlier but welcome the revisions. I just want to point out that the name for the society is the Fellowship of White Magic. A lot of the characters that are NPCs are based off of comic-book characters Zenith: Superman without the same power level and absolute moral fortitude along with a much different origin that fits in with the greater narrative. Olympia: Similar to Wonder Woman but different origin, powers, equipment, personality, and such. She has elements of a Percy Jackson type Demigod as well. Plus she actually looks Greek :P Pariah: A composite of Batman, Punisher, and Michael Westen without the scientific knowledge and riches along with being a different race. Also not insane like Punisher.