[quote=PureThoughts] Can you guys check out my CS on page 10 and make sure it's all good? I haven't roleplayed in a bit, and you guys look like some veterans of the old server :P [/quote] I like the description, the class is lovely, although there are some grammatical errors. "that's skill are mainly focused helping allies" Let's turn that into "with skills that are mainly focused for helping allies" Other grammatical errors, but that's not really important. For the skills, you should probably give them a proper name, and the first active seems a bit over powered, perhaps you should give that buff a timer, like the buff lasts for twenty seconds. Second skill is the same thing, for just two days in the game world, I think the character - or any character - wouldn't know a skill that is that strong. Basically, 100% of damage done to him is converted to health for him, bit too OP, lower that down to 10% or 20% and we're fine. Five seconds seem a bit too long as well, maybe 2.5 seconds would be better. The attack speed boost seems a tad bit too strong, maybe 15% or 20%. Just my opinion though. I like the ratio on the cool down, but perhaps you could increase that to 15%, I think that should be the max. Third skill is fine, I like it, Braum, that you? Passive doesn't seem to fit the character, I think you should change that to increase the endurance, not to increase the damage.