Reworked the powers, made the thieving thing into a secret. Also, turned her hair brown.

Note to self, don't write CS' at 1 am. You will make no sense. Not that I ever make much sense. I just made even less sense before. I might need to keep working on it. Do tell if it's needed.
As for that other char, he'll come along soon enough. I can start solo at first and then make him into a playable character. I'd just rather concentrate on this guy getting approved first.

[quote=Yog Sothoth]
Alter's powers are almost like my character from another rp, named Walt
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Oh my! I'm sorry for accidentally ripping you off, friend. I'd love to read your guys CS, if you still have it. CS reading is fun!

EDIT: I like Maxwell, he's adorable 'cause he has a psychic connection with his dog. Made me go daww.