I... have my doubts about that Archer. The stats and abilities just don't mesh properly with the identity; his statline matches the more overtly-inhuman Archers whilst his [i]modus operandi[/i] and heritage would put him closer to Robin Hood or Emiya. His Luck is [i]completely[/i] out of whack for a guy who spent twenty years just trying to get home, bizarrely. There's a buff from being favoured by a goddess--but no mention that two gods had it in for him before he could get home. Magic Resistance that grants near total immunity, then total immunity against things he explicitly isn't innately resistant to (succumbed to mental influence at one point in the story, needed a magic herb to resist transformation). Two of his NP's make me sad by essentially being 'things other canon characters have, only better' (and one of them is already in the RP, to boot) but the biggest thing there: no specific mention of his actual bow, but does have a bag of winds (missing: the west wind) that was in his possession for all of a day before his crew unleashed them and caused a huge storm that sent them flying back. I'm... confused. It's like you got the identity, wrote up a list of strengths and weaknesses as well as reasons for both, then set about making all their mythological weaknesses and flaws into mechanical strengths. You've got the concept of a guile hero, but the statline and ability set has as much subtlety as Gilgamesh. I'm sorry if this seems overly aggressive. >.<