[quote]When the name of this Noble Phantasm is invoked, arrows fired by it bear the concept of 'passing though twelve targets', allowing Archer to select twelve target points that the arrow must pass through in order. Once released, the arrow will maneuver even impossibly to reach their target. This effect will persist until all twelve targets have been pierced, the arrow is destroyed, or, in the case of targeting an enemy, a LCK check is passed before being hit. [/quote]

You have created ranged, super-targetting Gae Bolg. That it could be destroyed is the only way it's actually inferior, because Gae Bolg needs you to be within poking distance and can't then proceed to impale the Master and any other Servants that happen to be in the area with the one shot. O_o

I think this might be a wording problem. XD

[quote]Rank: E ~ A++[/quote]

... what non-Noble Phantasm item would he be creating from the ether that gives it an A++ rank? There is limited utility in a giant wooden horse. @_@