So... You dedicated the entire bio to a transition from innocent kid to cold-blooded psychotic killer happening in an instant. Right. Are you sure this character fits? I'm usually not very difficult about the kind of characters people want to play, nor want to bitch too much about the absurdity of it all, but Alyss is seriously fucked up. Cutting up other kids and being smug bout it is not a record that helps you get through your application process. I mean we don't even know how she got into the Library; she more sounds like a mission than an employee. Seriously, we know she was bullied and that she cut other kids up and that's it. I don't usually reject people for a bio, but this is something that needs to be changed.

Ability-wise;

Dark Fury gives you a ranged attack, so it doesn't need to be a power-up as well.

Dark Guardian is op. A back-to-base teleport is cool and insanely useful, but it can't be instant because that's basically an ultimate dodge, and the stat multiplier is besides op wholly unnecessary.

Other abilities look good and stuff. But seriously, that bio :/