In a normal murder mystery, Henry would totally be the first victim. [quote=AuntFlavia]Normally people get stuck with one liners for posts. One idea would be, if it were a conversation between 2 characters, the players could work it out in a pm, write their lines back and forth. [/quote] RPG's mibbit chatroom is pretty good for this, especially for more than two parties. Crucial thing is only to do this with dialogue; body text should be written from only one character's perspective. [quote=AuntFlavia] One thing we could discuss about our characters is their appearance. I don't think that would be revealing too much about them, and it might help our posts in general to know what everyone else looks like. [/quote] Benji typically looks like a bit of a modern hippie with loose clothing and such but I think I detailed in the post. He probably has some earrings that didn't occur to me as I was writing, but I think a long spiky one in one ear and a stretcher in t'other. [quote=Notorious] No. Not even remotely xD. [/quote] I could tell. Something about the way you used the word 'quid' once didn't click. Otherwise got away with it. :P Since people can tell whereabouts most people come from on accent alone in the UK and James and Benji should be able to clock the other from speech, Benji is from the West Country - farmer land. Kind of like the UK equivalent of the deep South I guess, but not considered as ridiculous. Where's James from?