[quote=Monkeypants] Sorry if I wasn't clearer with my description, as well with the Tachyon array. I'll address the arm first.On the map above, I was meaning the region where the Crux arm, Carina arm and Orion 'spur' are closest. A large swath of that area. or quadrant, how ever you wish to divvy up the galaxy. that'd be the location. Moving dangerously close to human borders and in the case of Sigma, actually having a DMZ between us due to a conflict a while back. That's my request. I must reiterate, it's supposed to be a big nation.Secondly, with the Tachyon weapon, I'll re-word it in the NS to reflect the weapons updated description. It creates a Tachyon stream and other dense and radioactive elements are dumped in to it, and in turn dragging them along at faster than light speed. So it hits with the Tachyons along with various other metals and radioactive element particles.. Is this updated description agreeable?Edit: I believe the majority of the NS is complete.. Now comes the daunting task of Writing up a history. I'm likely going to keep it short and sweet... I'm just more interested in making -new- history via IC rp.. [/quote] Ok all this seems fine. Not sure you get what I mean with the arms or maybe you do and I'm not getting it but it's no big deal for now. See unleashing tachyons could be an issue which is why I made the assumption they were a contained accelerant. It's fine for now any so no worries :sun I look forward to seeing more :D