[quote=Demon Shinobi] Alright so. She seems fine to me. A bit too creative for my tastes >)>lol jk. No but seriously, she's fine. However, I think you should try and add a little more detail as to what she CAN do with the powers and make her limits a little more clear. The weakness are good and all, but still a bit vague, you know? Also... About the swords...1) From here on out they shall be known as Tensa Zangetsu White and Tensa Zangetsu Black. ^That's a joke of course...2) I feel I should tell you that Yin is actually the with the white dot in it and Yang is the White side with the Black dot in it. SO you kind of got the color and naming wrong. Unless you did that on purpose. In which case... I feel dumb TT__TT [/quote] I did it on purpose I messed up with the which power went with which. The white sword known as yin will have shadow powers for it so it's like black with the white dot and the same as the black sword but switched Also I'll edit it tomorrow