Two sections done. One to go. I like rewriting this actually. Only 1,200 words for the first two sections, which is less than i previously wrote but now that I think about it. I feel this way is a bit more interesting, and it moves at a quicker pace. --- All done. I'll be changing the currency to include writs of credit (it's like money). The Saviors armory has their own special writs. Also, IC wise, if there is a problem (kapu, reap) from your characters we can collab over it, or if you want interaction, or whatever just let me know. ----- Also, please advance the time in your characters perspective to morning. even if you have to post 12 pages to do it (actually, that would be fun to read).