Just a couple of things that don't have any significant impact on your post liferusher, but just saying/asking for clarity

First, there is no sweating in SAO
I have nothing to base this off besides the SAO 4koma which was authored by Kawahara Reki.
 [url=http://www.batoto.net/read/_/98080/sword-art-online-4-koma_ch1_by_riceballicious/4]My evidence is here[/url]

The other thing is, lunch. It should still be early morning at the moment, so it should be breakfast, not lunch.

Like I said, nothing significant, just more so nitpicking
But otherwise a good post