GM tune-in.

First the easier thing. I added my 2 other characters – Hazumi and Zi. As you’ll see, I’ve used their bios to try and explain most of the events of Season 1. While you don’t have to read the stuff in the hiders of Hazumi’s bio, if you do, read them in order. 
If anyone has any questions or corrections, or general comments about my characters, do pose them. 

Now, for[b] Cypher’s CS[/b]. Overall it’s really well-done and fits quite neatly in this universe. The one big problem I see with it is that the moment anyone graduates from the Academy they must fulfil their duty in chasing and killing Renegades. Now, from what I gather, Noel still [i]does [/i] that in a loose sense so that might be why they let him off. That and him being mostly a support kind of character. Do think of a reason why he’s allowed to keep his Instrument if he’s not technically working as part of the Academy anymore. 

Now, when it comes to his abilities, you have to keep in mind that some of those need to be transferred to the Instrument section as the manipulation of memories are generally overpowered and non-human abilities, bordering on essence changing. In that sense, if you could move Dominance and Pathokinesis to the Instrument section and be especially careful of when and how you use the former, everything else seems ok. Only exception is the Duet Summoning because of my very strict “no space-time travel” policy. I’m afraid you’ll need to either scratch that ability or find a different meaning to it. 

On a different note, while I’m sure it’ll be interesting to have someone with his background around, I will just ask you to not go in-depth with any pornographic or otherwise sexually explicit content in your posts. It’s ok to keep things vague and even have some flashbacks or IC conversations or things like that, but what I don’t want to see is a flashback with a detailed scene depicting his activity as a porn star. Again, I support maximum freedom but IC sex is the one big no-no. 

So, when you’ve made those corrections give me a nudge and I’ll check out your CS again. :) It would also be interesting to see if we can connect your character to any others, for example Hazumi who probably had some interactions with him while in the Academy or Emmet whom he might know on a different channel (through Darius).