[quote=JonxlatheLion] And how do you mean meaningless numbers? I can edit the post a little but I don't see how it could help... :/ EDIT: Yeah i'm looking at it now.... to turn it into two paragraphs would make it inappropriate structure wise. It's all the same basic subject. [/quote] A simple fix would be to add a few spaces/indentation just before each new power (note: that's spaces, not line breaks), assuming that this forum allows for that in the first place. - Look at a random thick book to see what I mean. Most of them will have lines where the 'speaker' changes from one character to another offset a bit to the right, this allowing the reader to instantly notice when this shift happens. It really helps to stop the book to change into a giant wall of text. - Alternatively, you can add dashes in front of each new power, or [b]bold[/b] the name of each power/ability. As for what I mean with meaningless numbers: [quote] "Johnny Blaze is one of the strongest and most powerful beings on the planet, while the Ghost Rider, is for all intents and purposes described as boundless in power to the extent where the Ghost Rider was able to defeat Dr. Strange in battle [B](>This part>) [16]; << [/b] the Ghost Rider is one of the most powerful beings in the Universe.[/quote] These bracketed numbers pop up in several places around the post. Am I right to assume you copied the whole deal off of a wiki somewhere?