Yay, thank you for the congrats, guys! @Jig: That's totally okay. Good luck with your game, by the way! My post is up and done, as well! Sorry for the length, I really didn't expect it to go on that long. But yeah, there's your introduction of the NPCs so far. You can keep the first bit of your reactions to the Manor/NPCs somewhat shorter if you think it's going to be tedious; I'd really rather you put the time and focus into the reactions/appearance of your rooms, what your character does to get ready for the ball, what they're wearing, etc. *EDIT: @Ginger/Notorious - What cute moments between those two! Love it. I'll just ask, Notorious, that you edit the bit about James exiting after the women to him leaving before Rikki? Just for the sake of making sense of the end bit of Flavia's post.