[quote=The Fated Fallen]
Btw I have posted my character sheet, though it was easy to miss. Is it approved?
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ah yes, I forgot. 

I like your character but there are a couple of small things that bug me. She's an Orlesian, an elf and a mage, a combination that would cause her to be treated like filth, specially in Denerim. Your CS doesn't seem to reflect this though. Also seems unlikely that she would be able to serve the chantry and marry a templar without someone figuring out she was a mage. Also, what rebellion were you referring to? Other than this your character is fine.

Pyro V I'm not too sure on the sword; its not that I have any problem with the idea itself as much as the fact we would then have more sword using mages than staff using ones. If we get some more ranged characters this won't be so much of a problem though. Other than that your characters fine.