Pixi, It's all good no harm no foul. Also I believe you've apologized enough for a few weeks :P

Yog, As has been echoed as long as this theoretical character isn't a stereotype its all good. 

Dingo, Well I'm not really a fan of combo-platter powers. The whole indomitable will and heroic inducement thing seem a little tacked on to someone who was rejuvenated to a physical prime already. Also his soul-bound weapons are a little overpowered. I have no idea why an ancient shield is warded against Bullets :P Also it fails to explain why he was even chosen for such a thing. And he seems to be another pure physical character which I feel we may have enough of already.