@Eudoxa
Alright, thank you for the tip! C: I'm in the middle of fixing it, and it's starting to look a little better.

@Sherlock
Now that I think about it, I think I do need to improve my basics / anatomy. I've never tried drawing realistic / semi-realistic humans before, so I guess that would be first step. 
Thank you for that, I'll go and try it out now. :3 (And alright, I'll be posting more progress shots later on, as well.)