Sweet, I'll keep mulling it over, maybe type out a rough draft to see where else he needs work. I'll go with the senses option as well, as it sounds like it would be the best bet to help notice the, what I'm assuming are, the nearly impossible to perceivable changes that are inherent in Akasha-Deviancy. as well as the anti-hero route. I was fifty-fifty on it, but you have a good point and I noted he is sorta set up better as that kinda person with his refusal to back down from his choice, which appears mostly self serving at the moment. I think I'm even more exited now