[quote=kapuchu]
I think the last thing that strikes me as off is when she woke up as a half-wyvern with a puddle of melted metal on the floor. Alright, her flames are hit, I'll give you that, but it isn't hot enough to just melt metal, let alone something as tough as aluminium. 
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While I fully concede the point on everything else (sometimes, I hate my brain for forgetting everything), I feel a need to point out that aluminum actually isn't that hard to melt. Some people have molten aluminum by just burning wood and using a fan to add airflow. I've done so with just a blowtorch. So she'd be able to melt a soda can.
Nonetheless, if you feel I do need to change it, I will.