[quote=kapuchu]
Aluminium's melting point is 680 degrees celcius. 1220 Fahrenheit if you use that. It's just insanely hot, and far more than should realistically be possibly at that point in time. You're just a new Shifter and your powers aren't all that strong yet. Melting metal is just a bit too much so early on. After two years of training it/getting stronger, then perhaps. But the first time she shifts it won't be possible. I'm not saying you absolutely can't have it, but just that she's not capable of making fire that hot so early on. 
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Alright, I think I've fixed it to correspond with what you said to fix, how's it look now?