[quote=HylianRose]
I edited my CS and changed Sera into a human Cyborg. I'd been thinking about it for a few days and decided on a story. It also gives Sera a little bit more depth, I feel. So take a look at it and tell me what you think.
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Uh, you didn't actually add depth, you just replaced a good character with a shallow veneer of angst and tragedy. I [i]really[/i] don't like the 'full body cyborgs, and by extension robots, may randomly die at any moment' thing it suggests, either.