[quote=Lennon79]
... If having a negative character is really that bad, I might as well rewrite it.
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[quote=Silent Resonance]
Don't worry about them :P They don't know how you plan to play your character. From the character sheets my character looks like a psychopath but there is a lot more to my character then a CS. If Hibiki accepts it then play him out as you see fit. Because only you see the direction you want your character to take, no one else. :) Let us join in the journey with you :D
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Oh no, I'm just saying that it looks like he'll turn into a wraith, cause from Madoka Magica, Despair = Transformation.

But this is a fan work, after Madoka became a god.
Maybe it's different. Besides, it's giving up that turns you most of the time. So if you stay determined and have the NEVAR GIV UP mindset...

Honestly, it depends on what happens in the story.