[quote=Silent Observer]
Shit son, that was a wall of text. Mostly good stuff though, I like that a lot of things are coming together, kind of. LOL at the church possibly being a porno ring, that is just golden! As for feedback, other than some minor grammar and spelling errors, everything seems fine. I also think you messed up the order of Cooper Harley's name once.
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To be fair, [i]I[/i] have trouble keeping his name straight.