[b]Image:[/b] [hider=appearance][img]http://i.imgur.com/EwULR9B.jpg[/img][/hider]
[b]Name:[/b] Ashly Ashton
[b]Age:[/b] 17
[b]Gender:[/b] Female
[b]Race:[/b] human
[b]Weapon:[/b] [i][url=http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/109/9/9/hyperdimension_neptunia_weapons___samurai_sword_by_grayfox5000-d62bq1q.png]Whip Sword[/url]:[/i] (The sword is amber colored instead of violet) A sword that can separate into multiple segments interlinked by a wire. In the extended state it is used like a whip and if used right can be wound around a target.
[b]Semblance:[/b] [i]Temperance Shock:[/i] Ashly can generate electricity from her body and shock other by touching them. She can conduct this through her weapon and whoever gets hit by it gets shocked. She can also course the electricity through her own body almost doubling her reaction time, this uses a lot of energy and always leaves her sore afterwards.
[b]Color:[/b] Amber

Would this be alright or do I need to change something?