Lol
One thing I would like to request .... change of IGN chukkle
Reason being is ... yet to have been posted, but it's a character Caits and myself have agreed upon to show up later
Actually they have appeared, but the name wasn't revealed yet ....
Well if you don't want to change it, I can always make a change

Anyway, if you don't mind character background clashes, then it looks fine
If you want you can change it

Looks pretty much fine to me
You do not need to have the explanation next to the night vision